Hi,

I am looking for some technical critique on an additional paragraph (on printing concepts) that I am contemplating to add to the "concepts" page that I created for SuSE Linux. Note this page is intended for computer literate users who are trying out Linux (and more specifically openSUSE Linux) for the first time.

Proposed addition is here:
http://en.opensuse.org/User:Oldcpu

I propose to add it to the end of this page.
http://en.opensuse.org/Concepts

All constructive comments are welcome.

Please, as opposed to just staying "the page is all wet and useless", please say "the page is all wet and useless for the following reasons ( a ) list specific details, ( b ) list specific details, ( c ) list specific details, etc ..." Suggestions as to how one could improve would be even better. If there are any SUSE specific links/URLs (on the en.opensuse page) that can be recommended to include, please provide URL.

Thanks in advance.